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well @StuF 

 

That is an appetiser that has opened up my appetite....

 

can I have another serving please...?

 

Seriously your writing does actually reach me within that is why I believe in your work

 

Your style just resonates with me as song writing.

 

share some styles of musical artists...songs that deeply resonate with you if you would like to

 

Reading this helps me get out of my head...it is more  importantly that you trust me to share with..

 

I hope that it helps you somehow in sharing...

 

again as always...

no pressure...

 

I feel that I am just too much for many people even in the world of mental illness and trauma..

sad...

StuF
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Hey @Sophia1 

 

Thanks as ever for the feedback

 

I'll see what else I can dredge up 🙂

 

PS Don't be sad

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appreciated @StuF

 

 

don't take on my mood though will you..

 

look forward to reading more

take care

StuF
Senior Contributor

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You take care too @Sophia1 

 

I'll get back to you 🙂

StuF
Senior Contributor

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OK @Sophia1 

 

Choosing poems is fun, but also stressful! lol

 

Last one for a while...

 

Madly In Love

 

I’ve got my world on inside out

I want to sing but only sigh

Certainties succumb to doubts

And all my truths decay to lies

 

Milking spiders for the answers

To questions I have yet to ask

Rarely so brave to take the chances

That involve shedding this mask

 

With a perpetual sense of dread

Whilst flailing in a blinding fog…

Still, if I survive this night

Perhaps tomorrow I’ll find you

 

I imagine you bathed in light

A vision splendid for tired eyes

You resurrect my will to fight

But now I know why Cupid cries

 

The tears rolling down his cheeks

Do not well only from sadness

Rather the life in love he seeks

Brings with it the ultimate madness

 

I may as well tag some others while I'm at it! @TAB @Appleblossom @greenpea @tonys 

TAB
Senior Contributor

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Dont stress @StuF 

Prose not my thing, so wont comment .

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@StuF   i wish i could fall in love

StuF
Senior Contributor

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All good @TAB  🙂

StuF
Senior Contributor

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I kind of wish I could too @greenpea 

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@StuF 

Magnifico!

Grazias.

 

I do not feel they need explaining.  The speak to me a lot.