10-07-2021 07:38 PM
10-07-2021 07:38 PM
Well, I said I had a new poem. I'm not travelling so well at the moment, but I've wrangled this out. Not sure it's finished, but I pretty much am with it 🙂
Enjoy?
Remains
Happiness rolls down my cheeks
Droplets borne of pure elation
A scream commits me to wonder
At the universal light
There is a certain strength in darkness
Indeed, we cannot be without
Nightmares consolidate our dreams
Guiding us to our destiny
Past deceptive desperation
And unsustainable fears
To the edge of infinity
Beyond all hesitation
Stepping into curiosity
Our will subservient
In the face of imagination
And the mysteries of hope
My tears fall on hallowed ground
Saturating innocence
Through this divine alchemy
Life remains eternal
10-07-2021 09:28 PM
10-07-2021 09:28 PM
Hello Stu'
Strong thoughts and feelings expressed in your poem. Moving, and as someone recently used the expression, could be referred to as poignant.
You've mentioned not travelling so well at the moment. I hope that your situation improves quickly for better feelings ahead.
With Best Wishes
11-07-2021 10:29 AM
11-07-2021 10:29 AM
Thanks for the feedback on the poem and the hopes for improvement. My situation is not so bad, really, I'm just not reacting well to it at present. I'll get over it 🙂
Part of the problem has been reading other people's stories which are Much worse than mine and the feeling of "What am I so worried about in My life then?"
Anyway, thanks again for the response!
11-07-2021 04:00 PM
11-07-2021 04:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing one of your verses with us
Wow! What an incredibly raw, authentic and powerful piece of work!
You definitely have a gift for writing and I would love to be able to read some of your other verses - but only if you feel comfortable to share these
Take care,
ShiningStar
11-07-2021 04:22 PM
11-07-2021 04:22 PM
Hi @ShiningStar
@bipolarbunny has been generous enough to share many poems in this thread... if you have the time to browse you'll be richly rewarded
Dimity
11-07-2021 04:34 PM - edited 11-07-2021 05:29 PM
11-07-2021 04:34 PM - edited 11-07-2021 05:29 PM
Hello Stu'
I agree that there can be some difficulty when reading life details from others, and keeping our own position in perspective. However, I think it is always easy to minimise our own position and feel that we should be thankful that our position is not worse.
When we read through threads, posts and responses, we see that other people often make similar comments, minimising their own situation and trying to make way for other more severely affected people. I have, at times, reflected on my own situation, that due to a number of factors, including a sense of "hurt pride", that I may not always have sought or used the resources that may have been available to me. Because of my age, some of the resources, that exist now, did not exist earlier in my life. {My 'teen years were just at the end of the era of mental health institutions, asylums.} The consequence, I believe, is that my quality of life may well have been diminished to a significant degree. Also, my capacity to contribute to the community and people around me has also been diminished. So, those people could possibly have missed some contribution that I could otherwise have offered. That may, in part, have been because I didn't think I needed assistance and, if I did think that assistance may have been beneficial, was not prepared to ask for it. There were also issues of social stigma and fear. While there still exists concern about stigma and similar issues, education, information and improved treatments have meant that those social issues have diminished considerably over the past 50 years.
I now believe, by individually recognising our respective positions and thinking of how we can improve our capacity, in addition to the knowledge that we subsequently acquire, we can improve not only our own position, but mutually share with and help those people around us. This forum being one of the available ways by which we can receive and learn, and also extend assistance to others.
The following information is available on the WEB, and also, even more graphic material. I would certainly prefer to suffer a mild form of MI and be able to help others today, than the situation that I may otherwise have been in, as recently as the 1970's
A strong warning about the following material available on the web:
Institutions such as described in the following material existed until the 1960's & 70's
The following is a website which is part of an American course presented by:
lumencandela Introduction to Psychology Module 15: Therapy and Treatment
There is a great deal of other information available.
https://courses.lumenlearning.com/wmopen-psychology/chapter/introduction-to-mental-health/
Learning Objectives
Explain how people with psychological disorders have been treated throughout the ages and discuss deinstitutionalization
Describe the ways in which mental health services are delivered today, including the distinction between voluntary and involuntary treatment
{I cannot offer any guarantee as to the quality, correctness or accuracy of the website information above, but it is offered as a brief introduction}
11-07-2021 04:43 PM
11-07-2021 04:43 PM
Thanks for those links. I will read through the 2nd one later. Looks interesting 🙂
I appreciate the time and effort you put into your responses!
11-07-2021 07:53 PM
11-07-2021 07:53 PM
Good reading so far! I've only managed the first page, will take a while to consume it all.
Had forgotten about trephining!
Really interesting stuff; thanks 🙂
12-07-2021 08:17 PM
12-07-2021 08:17 PM
I must confess, I have failed you...
That link was interesting, but unfortunately beyond my powers of concentration.
Thanks again 🙂
13-07-2021 12:22 PM
13-07-2021 12:22 PM
"My tears fall on hallowed ground
Saturating innocence
Through this divine alchemy
Life remains eternal"
Wow @StuF such powerful and beautiful words born from your struggle. Really love the last verse, it speaks to me in so many ways. Definitely don't love that you are struggling, but love the way you can express that struggle in such a powerful way. So awesome my friend xx
BB 🐰💙
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