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This is a good poem @StuF it just about sums it all up really for people nowadays. Thanks for sharing, it will make folk feel less alone in their struggles by reading it

Kyle1
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I know the Indian pacific, and the country it traverses... Grew up in one of the hamlets that would begin to shake on frosty nights as the train forwarned its coming still 10 kilometres down the line.

 

Your poem brought to mind an almost long forgotten stoicism and acceptance so elemental as to allow the raw durability of a hard yet sensitive landscape to reside within our own neural network. And to hum and chug into the outward ripples of spirit...

 

Thank you so much for sharing, @StuF 

Very much a meaningful read for me. 

God bless 🙏 

 

StuF
Senior Contributor

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Thanks @SmilingGecko 

I'm glad you connected with it

StuF
Senior Contributor

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Thanks @Kyle1 

I really appreciate your response 🙂

tonys
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Its a beauty @StuF . I could hear a faint digeridoo and hear the clickity clack on the track.  Thanks for posting it fella.        Tonys   

 

 

Now I'm gunna get the Rn to read it to me slow and I reckon it'll lull me of to a lovely sleep.

StuF
Senior Contributor

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Thanks @tonys 

 

Hope it helps with sleep!!

tonys
Senior Contributor

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ZzzzzZ                ZzzzzzZ         ZzzzZ       @StuF                tonys

StuF
Senior Contributor

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lol @tonys !

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Love train trips @StuF also evocative of other journeys.

Thanks Apple

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@StuF  i think your poem is wonderful.  thank you for sharingxx